Attempting to draw without bases 2

Well I've been practicing A LOT over these couple of days, trying out different poses etc and using pictures as inspiration/reference and this is the first one I actually like
equine-bases.deviantart.com/ar… I used that to draw from, yes you read right, FROM I didn't use the base this time! As you can probably see as this isnt great but by my standards, it's ok

MLP belongs to Hasbro
Dave and Crim belong ti me XD